Beehive 5 Progress 1 Test

There are 10 errors in this business letter. Look at each line. If there is an error in that line, you will need to retype the line, and correct all the errors. Highlight the corrections you made. 

If there is not an error, you would NOT retype the line. 

Instructions: The issue of water pollution in our rivers especially the Rio Cobre with numerous unwanted releases of poisonous chemicals over the years has become a major crisis. 

Write an essay that describes the impact of these unfortunate circumstances that are repeated so often. 

1. Show how these chemicals/ pollutants enter the rivers/ underground freshwater sources.
2. Explain how the pollution affects the environment and the communities that rely on the rivers/ water sources within these areas. 
3. Suggest ways the environmental impacts from these chemicals could be reduced or eliminated. 

Instructions: The issue of water pollution in our rivers especially the Rio Cobre with numerous unwanted releases of poisonous chemicals over the years has become a major crisis. 

Write an essay that describes the impact of these unfortunate circumstances that are repeated so often. 

1. Show how these chemicals/ pollutants enter the rivers/ underground freshwater sources.
2. Explain how the pollution affects the environment and the communities that rely on the rivers/ water sources within these areas. 
3. Suggest ways the environmental impacts from these chemicals could be reduced or eliminated. 

Instructions: The issue of water pollution in our rivers especially the Rio Cobre with numerous unwanted releases of poisonous chemicals over the years has become a major crisis. 

Write an essay that describes the impact of these unfortunate circumstances that are repeated so often. 

1. Show how these chemicals/ pollutants enter the rivers/ underground freshwater sources.
2. Explain how the pollution affects the environment and the communities that rely on the rivers/ water sources within these areas. 
3. Suggest ways the environmental impacts from these chemicals could be reduced or eliminated.